Manny (The Fred’s nickname during baseball season) had to write a story for his writing workshop in third grade. I thought I’d publish his first masterpiece.
Aliens On The Loose III
by Andres
The aliens grew big. Moon, an alien, said, “I wish the boy was here”. The aliens, TV and Electricity, they heard a noise. The aliens started running. They looked out the window. They saw the boy. TV said, “Yea!” The boy went in the house. The aliens jumped all over him.
Moon said, “How big you’ve gotten.”
The boy said, “Thanks. Let’s go outside and celebrate TV’s birthday.”
The aliens and the boy made a robot. TV said, “Let’s see what it can do.” The boy said, “O.K.”, so they did.
The robot started to move. The aliens and the boy took one step back. The robot can do everything. So they turned it off.
The boy said, “Let’s go upstairs.” TV said, “You go up. I will catch up.”
TV turned on the robot. He got wild! His eyes turned red. The robot said, “Alert!” The robot ran away in the street. Running back and forth, the robot crashed into a fire hydrant. It got a sports car wet. The guy said, “Thanks!”
TV said, “Oh no!” The boy said, “I’m coming downstairs.” TV said, “Oh no!”, again.
The boy said, “What happened? Don’t explain. TV, we have to catch the robot before it destroys anything else.” TV and the boy explained to the parents what happened.
The robot went right through a brick wall. The robot blasted right to space. TV said to the boy, “Let’s put our spacesuits on.”
They went to outer space. They saw the robot, it destroyed Pluto.
“Good thing Pluto is not a planet”, said TV.
“Oh no!”, the boy, “It destroyed Mars! Well, Mars isn’t a planet now either.”
TV said, “What?”
“What will happen when it destroys Earth?”, said Moon.
“Impossible,” said the boy, “because the Earth has something to make it live. If it destroys the Sun, we people will die.”
“How do you know all of of this stuff?”, asked TV.
“Because we made the robot,” said the boy. “Let’s stop it!”
The robot grabbed Moon. It threw Moon to the Sun! The boy said, “I will get you.” Moon said, “No!”
The boy stepped on the Sun. He was burned so badly that he could not move. Moon grabbed the boy and put him on Earth. The aliens put the boy in the freezer. The aliens opened the freezer. The boy got out.
The door knocked. The aliens slowly opened the door. It is the robot! The boy got up and the robot threw the boy at the freezer.
The boy said, “Bring it on!”
The robot ran toward the boy. The boy threw the robot in the freezer. The robot exploded.
“Well, everything is back to normal,” said TV.
THE END
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